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:iconkobb:
Click the SWF and use your keyboard arrow keys to navigate!

This is a short story I boarded to update my portfolio, so I can actually get up the guts to send something out.

Any and all critique you guys could give would be very helpful! Let me know what's reading well, what's confusing, what might be cooler - anything that comes to mind!

EDIT1:
:bulletred: fixed the hookup in shot 7 - there was a superfluous drawing in there.
:bulletred: made it navigable by keyboard arrow keys! Just click on the video first and away you go. c:

EDIT2:
:bulletred: added some more acrobatics to make the hawk's exhaustion make more sense.
:bulletred: various other tweaks X)
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:iconkitgryph:
Idiocy is a necessary ingredient for 'Cool'.
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:iconbluespottedfrog:
*bluespottedfrog Aug 23, 2012  Professional Filmographer
nice boards, Love the composition and posing.
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Mood: Love ~Scarredblade Oct 28, 2011  Student Digital Artist
That's awesome. If you hold down the arrow when the bird's flying, it looks like an actual animation! Again, that's really cool!
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:iconkobb:
Hey thanks! c:
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:iconfruitbatslyra:
~fruitbatslyra Aug 30, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha, that was a very done! :D
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Mood: Amused ~Xendria101 Aug 28, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That is an entertaining animation work. Nice drawings too.
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:icongashu-monsata:
`Gashu-Monsata Jun 29, 2011  Student Digital Artist
OH LOL, don't mind me :P I forgot it was controlled by keyboard. It's just, I can just see the button on the side and just just click it still :P
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:iconkobb:
Ah yeah, I moved them off at some point so I could export them as images without the buttons being visible. They're still there if you download it into your browser... and apparently slightly visible otherwise. My bad. X)
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`Gashu-Monsata Jun 29, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Hey, I don't know if it's just me, but the left and right arrows are not on the page anymore! :O I can't click them!
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