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Finally got these four done! 8D Now to try to study for an exam and do the assigned environment at the same time, yay!

So the assignment was to create a character lineup composed of the following roles: Hero, Comic Sidekick, Villain, and Misc (or whatever you want for the fourth, basically). They also need an environment that they would fit in, as well as short character bios and a story to go with them.

Here's my story for these four:

Paye is a young man who lives in a nomadic herding tribe in Africa, content to do his part as a member of his tribe. His best friend and pet is a perky little cheetah named Karu, raised from cubhood. His people allow this, but are not entirely happy with the arrangement – after all, cheetahs are predators and known to hunt the flocks the tribe survives on.

The time comes to move the herds to better grazing ground, but soon afterward, some of the livestock starts disappearing… two or three animals a night. By themselves they aren’t great tragedies, but things like this add up fast and the tribe depends on their herds for survival. It isn’t long before Paye is approached by the chief (Kitok), who tells him the tribe blames Karu for the lost animals and that he’s got to go. Paye refuses, and while Kitok is sympathetic, his hands are tied. The only way Paye can take the blame off his pet is to prove that something else has been killing their herd animals. And thus begins his journey… where he eventually finds that there is in fact a witch at fault. Her name is Imamba and she can summon animal demons, using them to possess predators which she sics on the herd.

Paye demands to know why she is attacking his people - she claims this part of the grasslands as her own and is infuriated that the nomadic tribe has brought their herds to graze here. Paye tries to reason with her, saying that the earth belongs to no one person. The argument escalates until Paye loses his cool, threatening Imamba with war, now that he knows where she lives… of course she will have none of this and possesses Karu with a demon. The climax of the story, then, is Paye’s moment of decision – he has to figure out how to avoid getting killed and save his tribe’s livelihood… without having to hurt his beloved friend.

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:iconrachotamer:
Great story. I'm loving the character designs as well. Imamba looks wicked with that demon, by the way. :D

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Great drawings and plot line; well done. I love Karu; he's so adorable. =D *Squishes*

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:iconlunar-ninja:
Gasp! The suspense! @__@

I love the character designs. ;)

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:iconluckywolf:
Wonderful story for this, I've always found that stories are the hardest part to come up with for characters. Great design for Karu, such an innocent little guy :D

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that is absolutely awesome and amazing! i really love the plot and all the characters look fantastic. great job! good luck on your exam, i'm sure you'll do well! :D

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:iconzoharskarth:
KARU!!! NOOOO!!! *WAILS*

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Ooooooooooo...that's fun! I like it. I love Karu! -giggles-

UGH. Im still working on mine. My butt hurts and my elbow hurts...lol

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Imamba can be best friends with Karu and meee~~~ <333 She has awesome hair and a trendy loinclothhh~~ and cool grass leg..lets~~ 8D

RARGHH~~ *Cheetahtackle* <3333

Gaw I hope things turn out okay for Karu though. D8 That's pretty low of her.

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Woah. You've wrapped things up in this class with great design, and great story! I could easily see this being a movie! :wow:

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